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  • noro

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    Thanks so much for the comment :]
    September 19th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • queeniecharlie

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    Wow, that was really good. (:
    I like Beatle. ♥
    September 15th, 2010 at 04:27am
  • noro

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    Haha thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. I think, most definitley, I will write further more on Beatle in the future. :3 I love her personality.
    September 12th, 2010 at 09:13pm
  • auden

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    I think the background looks fine! To be honest I’ve never been a fan of black and white layouts, they’ve always looked plain, but I think you couldn’t have picked a better background. There’s always a rare exception and this is it.
    (I’ve actually made it my wallpaper haha)

    I adored the introduction. It reminded me of a really good story I read called Utah. It was based on a prompt under the ‘Writing Prompts,’ This girls parents named her Utah.

    I was kind of prepared for something like that, and to my amazement it wasn’t. Which is good because I like to be surprised and when I expect something bad I love it when it’s not what I thought. I’m really glad it wasn’t like that story.

    This was excellent mate. Though I do wish there was more going on I think this was perfect, especially the ending. It reflected her personality perfectly and I agree with her. I love me some Italian men too haha.

    Normally stories where it’s mostly background information or just thoughts I get bored, but I was intrigued by name and her personality.

    I love this and I think you did excellent!
    September 12th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • daggers

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    love this.
    you gave beatle such a voice. wow.
    brilliant. incredible.
    September 12th, 2010 at 01:04am