I think the background looks fine! To be honest I’ve never been a fan of black and white layouts, they’ve always looked plain, but I think you couldn’t have picked a better background. There’s always a rare exception and this is it. (I’ve actually made it my wallpaper haha)
I adored the introduction. It reminded me of a really good story I read called Utah. It was based on a prompt under the ‘Writing Prompts,’ This girls parents named her Utah.
I was kind of prepared for something like that, and to my amazement it wasn’t. Which is good because I like to be surprised and when I expect something bad I love it when it’s not what I thought. I’m really glad it wasn’t like that story.
This was excellent mate. Though I do wish there was more going on I think this was perfect, especially the ending. It reflected her personality perfectly and I agree with her. I love me some Italian men too haha.
Normally stories where it’s mostly background information or just thoughts I get bored, but I was intrigued by name and her personality.