I am sooooo sad! Where is an update? This is my fav story... I keep checking thinking my email is perhaps not working... I just want you to know that I am pouting and giving my best puppy dog eyes. *cries*. Pleeeease update soon? The suspense is killing me I love this story and you have a talent ... To not finish would be such a waste and would disappoint your fans (yes that was a guilt trip). I miss u!
Hey your biggest fan here heh :D i only have one word for this chapter.. WOW. i love the idea of giving her a.. um.. "exam" .. creepy and genius!! altho i dont think finding out her pain threshold is going to be fun for her.. checking *sensitive* areas could be though ! I wonder what the punishment for trying to run will be? and the line about sewing her mouth shut was pretty funny LoL That was a bit mean leaving it where did.. can you say cliffhanger hmph Loved this as usual cant wait for your next update! This is def one of my favs - funny sexy and original. Please continue :)
Carly is a little slow on the uptake there... she keeps trying to reason with them... uhm hello they just kidnapped you and are probably planning to do dirty nasty things to your body i dont think meekly saying.. please no is going to help... anyways that was a nice vivid image you painted - Shadows standing in the dressing room looking even bigger than he is *shivers* Yay update again I just noticed i have like 5 comments above this one *embarrassed* sorry i ramble :D
*raises hand* I would like some naughtiness thank you :D How does he know her brother! Why was she taken? Why was her brother murdered? and did i mention that yes i would like some naughtiness?... maybe... Shadows naughtiness? hehe Update soon :)
Hmm even though he was admiring her.. he still cant wait to break her... interesting. And wow pretty eyes. I wonder where they are taking her? And what does "training" consist of? Youve got me hooked! Cant wait for more! Update! :D
I love Shadows the asshole .. jus sumthin sexy bout a man taking charge LoL anyways awesome start i absolutely can NOT wait to see where this goes, where she ends up Please please please *puppy eyes* update soon :D