Excuse the Obscene, Ignore the Untrue - Comments

Just got into reading this and...
I LOVE IT! :D
YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
Like sometime soon! Kthanks (:

sounds interesting. I can't wait for the next update.

I love it!=) Keep updating. its so suspenseful! =P

I feel so pushy, being the last four comments now haha.
Yay for another update(:
He's so mean :D Love it.

YAY! :D You updated so good!
I love the description of everything, it's detailed and i can picture it in my mind.
^_^. I think, you should update more often, just saying (:

Excuse me D: More? Pleeeeease.

Mooooooooooooooore :D Please (:
I love it!

I really really liked this! It's the kind of stories I enjoy reading. (:

I love Danii already, because that's how i like to imagine my hotties, naked and ripped xD. Can't wait for more, am definatley subscribing (:

Love.
And no chapter is too long. :)

Woah this was awesome... it told nothing but it was still exciting.. if that makes sense? i dont know but i cant wait for more!!!!! Ugh the description of the blood was so detailed i could practically feel and taste it. Cant wait to see whats going on.. update soon :D

This was good an interesting. Very mysterious an amazing. I don't have much to say about it yet so I'll wait till more :)

[The sound of a heart beating can be heard, although the source is not the speaker] That reminded me of a play and a script format, which was intended, right?

I think you’re off to a good start. This story has a sort of mysterious, stubborn, and suspenseful feel to it already, so it really draws in the reader.

Keep going, m’dear <3