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  • bethums

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    love it :'D
    October 22nd, 2010 at 03:17pm
  • blueyes775

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    Im loving it already!!
    October 20th, 2010 at 04:51pm
  • justhannah;

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    :) Loved it!
    In my perspective, all your updates are absolutely amazing. ^.^
    October 18th, 2010 at 04:33am
  • Issues

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    *Hugs*
    I loved the chapter, especally the Zacky part.
    Please update soon.
    October 17th, 2010 at 06:36pm
  • FamousLastWords.

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    I'm really liking this so far!
    October 17th, 2010 at 05:07am
  • Chemicals Collide

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    This is a really good story. Everytime I get email subscriptions I always hope this story is in the list. Keep on with te good job.
    October 16th, 2010 at 08:09am
  • Shall We Run?

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    how do you get 100 subcribers in 2 chapters?
    I've severely jealous.
    I dig the story :]
    October 16th, 2010 at 06:36am
  • Nanner.

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    OH HO HO. I LOVED IT. :D
    Great update.
    ZACKY AT THE END <3 YES. Oh so sexeh for his shirt.
    I'm running out of shit to say. LMFAO.
    I love your descriptions but I like how you didn't over describe and it was down to the point. You give your readers a clear (sexy) image of what's going on and it's awesome.
    Uhm. Yeah. :D
    I'll comment you the edits.

    - Your personal grammar natzi. ;)
    October 16th, 2010 at 01:18am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can't wait for the next chapter..amazing story :)
    October 16th, 2010 at 12:27am
  • Broken Clocks

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    I'm really liking this story. (:
    You're an Amazing author.
    Ilooove.
    October 15th, 2010 at 10:51pm
  • SynnerSaynt

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    I wonder why Gates wanted Annabelle to come over there?
    I love how Zacky tried to act all seductive, in that "I'm not gonna hurt you" kind of way. :)
    October 15th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • bamftastic;

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    I personally think you're crazy. The second chapter was just as interesting as the first. xD
    October 15th, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • darkeyes14226

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    I'm really liking this story so far :) Can't wait for the next one!
    October 15th, 2010 at 08:59pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    Zacky is one foxy man LOL!

    i really like Annabelle's personality you can tell she doesnt take any shit lol

    the guys are starting to come in now...let the drama begin lol

    i cant wait to see what happens next!

    awesome update! =)
    October 15th, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • hachie

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    So let get this straight, her twin sister blamed Annabelle because their father favored her more, because of how she exceeded in combat?
    Wow her sister is selfish chick, even more that she became a I want to say blood whore to a leecher.
    Wow I am so happy that you updated and mention Syn and Shadows in this chapter, including Zacky.
    I wonder if they already know who she is already.
    You should defiantly have a chapter from their POV.
    I look forward to the chapter and hope you update soon again!!!!!
    October 15th, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • justhannah;

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    oh I love her. She's so freakin badass. ^.^ Update sooooon!
    October 4th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • foREVer an Angel

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    I love this new story, it's totally keep worthy. Update again soon!
    October 3rd, 2010 at 05:43am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I know this new story idea of yours :)
    I can't wait to read more soon
    October 1st, 2010 at 03:57am
  • Liz Mayhem :D

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    Uh yeah definitely keep worthy!
    Updateeee soon!
    October 1st, 2010 at 03:13am
  • TheMiniKitty

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    def. keep worthy
    update soon
    October 1st, 2010 at 01:01am