OH HO HO. I LOVED IT. :D Great update. ZACKY AT THE END <3 YES. Oh so sexeh for his shirt. I'm running out of shit to say. LMFAO. I love your descriptions but I like how you didn't over describe and it was down to the point. You give your readers a clear (sexy) image of what's going on and it's awesome. Uhm. Yeah. :D I'll comment you the edits.
So let get this straight, her twin sister blamed Annabelle because their father favored her more, because of how she exceeded in combat? Wow her sister is selfish chick, even more that she became a I want to say blood whore to a leecher. Wow I am so happy that you updated and mention Syn and Shadows in this chapter, including Zacky. I wonder if they already know who she is already. You should defiantly have a chapter from their POV. I look forward to the chapter and hope you update soon again!!!!!