Aw, gotta love Papa Gates :) I feel sorry for Brian not being able to afford the house that he needs to accommodate Beth and Nate too. God damn Clayre for bleeding him dry >:( I'm sure things will work out for them soon though (I hope) Loved the update hun, looking forward to more :D <3
I was happily shocked when I received the email for this update. I'm so glad that Beth admitted that she feels the same way about Brian and I really hope things work out for them in the end. xx
Wifey I don't have much to say other than this chapter has given me a happy! It also mirrors some things for me right now and I know you get what I mean. I nearly dropped dead when I saw the email that you had updated! I cannot wait to see what happens with these two! <3
Must have more....seriously I've sat here and read this over the past few hours and I am so in love with this story. I love the fact you didn't have them jump into anything too quickly that you let it build up over time and had them form a bond of friendship, which in my opinion is something a lot of people in real life don't do.
Colby is an ass, no two ways around that and he should be castrated for causing his son such torment when he knows he is doing so. I'm sort of hoping that his body is discovered on the side of some random road somehwere and that Nate never has to see him again. There is a difference between being a sperm donor and a father and to me clearly Colby is the first. I don't know how a parent could turn their back on their own flesh and blood, but you see it happen every day so it shouldn't surprise me. But the way you've written this is so realistic I jsut don't know how to put it into proper words.
I love the way this is AU and the guys are not rock stars off touring the world. It's nice to see them as regualr human beings with 9-5 jobs. And it is also refreshing to see Matt as a total horn dog instead of a pussy whipped man drolling over his girl. I actually like him in this and that's a first for me. So great job.
Nate...oh boy where do I begin? This kid has so much against him in life and yet has a mother who is willing to do all she can, even sacrifce her own happiness to see ihm grow up the way a child with autism should. I thought even before it was mentioned a lot of his underlying issues were with his father and the lack of affection he receieved from him and seeing how much this child already loves Brian, and I do believe he does love Brian, breaks my heart even more over what Colby is trying to do to keep both his son and Beth from having a happy life. Nate should be his first priority and instead it's making Beth and in turn his son as miserable as possible.
And now we have Beth feeling some insecurities in the fact that Brian loves her. I don't get she didn't see it, there aren't many men who would do what he has done for her since they've become a couple unless he was invested in this for all he had to give. I hope she wisens up and doesn't push him away anymore. I think Brian is a strong person, but after everything he's done to prove that he does want to be with her is a lot on any man and even though I do like Beth, she's being a tad bit selfish and needs to let go and let herself just feel whatever she wants to feel for him instead of put labels or brakes on it. It may have seemed rushed to the both of them but they are both where they are now for a reason, so she needs to stop overthinking it and just let it happen.
So I'm now going to click that button up top and hit subscirbe and get on my knees and hope that time allows you to write more soon. <333
Okay, my emotions have been all over the place these last couple of weeks, so I'm blaming that for why there are tears in my eyes and not that message he sent her. Although I am now giggling like a fool at T's comment ;)
Anyway, I loved it Hun, as always, and I hope Beth realises that having Brian be in love with her isn't such a bad thing. Looking forward to you getting more inspiration for this soon :) xx
I was sitting here wondering just what was up and it hit me just before I read what Zara said. I totally know how Beth feels. I really don't have much else to say other than I love it wifey. Can't wait til you get going on it again. Love you MOUNDS ;)
Aw, I can't wait to read more when you update again, whenever that may be. This story is just so amazing... and yum, I can totally picture Brian in a firefighter uniform. ;]
Eeep! I was looking for this story for ages cos I wasn't sure if I'd subscribed but I reckonised it once you updated :3 I'm so glad you updated this story, I love it so much! Please update soon I don't wanna wait for another 3 months x
I missed this story! I love Brian and Nate together *does happy dance* so cute (: And well if we get rid of Colby then Nate is going to be and feel better. Easy enough *i wish* Aww Brian loves Beth, hehehe so sweet :D
Of course he loves her! And I think she loves him too, she just can't stop her past stop her being happy with Brian! I love how Nate seems so much calmer now too.