Keep Me - Comments

I like this layout, but something that always bothers me is that its not centered. But, the banner is so pretty!

Okay, so the two girls are sisters right? I like the relationship between the two, they're very comfortable with each other, and can goof around as well. Wait, so now one is apologizing, I'm lost now. Jeez, 2 more hours of walking? How far away is the place they're going to? Okay so they're sisters and in love. So, they're doing some incest? That's cute, i mean i know its a little weird, but being happy, is being happy. Aww cute ending, I'm glad theyre happy. good job on this story!

Okay, first, I'm in love with the layout and the banner. Both are so pretty and go really well together (: Second, I love the little summary. I wish I could find a friend like that <3 Third, I think that this is a really lovely twist on a love story. Sisters in love? Wow. It didn't seem like it at all! I thought they were just two girls in love. I'm not an incest story/one-shot reader at all, but this captured my heart. It's so beautiful; the love that they have is so cute and amazing. It was well-written, lovely to read, with a lovely message at the end.
I have to agree with ezra koenig. about the spacing between the sentences, though. It threw me off a bit, but it wasn't so bad that I couldn't read it.
Amazing job (: <3

I loved the sentimentality of this, and your writing style is lovely.

This was a really lovely story. The sisters showed a really strong bond, and when they said they loved each other I couldn't help but smile. I don't usually read this kind of thing, but it was really well written and nice to read. The one thing I'd like to point out is that you didn't keep the spacing between paragraphs coherent and it got a little bit jumbled, which I found a little disconcerting, but that's just me being fussy. Lovely.

I loved it! For once it's a very different angle because they are sisters in love rather than just friends or lovers. I also really liked how you never really knew why they were running away until the end. It really emphasized their relationship! :)
Very well done!