Reach for the Stars, Fall on Your face - Comments

rewriting chapter 6! thanks for ideas

okay i love this story... but there are some spelling errors and i think that you shortened it up too much. i think you should make emphasize the things that happened when they said she had breast cancer... i also think that putting the stuff about mass and stuff shouldv'e been held until after she got out the hospital.. it kind of pulled me out of the story... and think you should also break down what happened when they found out kate died and i think you should break down the funeral... idk these are just my opinions :)

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I'm speechless!
when I come back to school me and you are writing the next chapter because i'm excited to see what happens!!!!!!!!!!

oh mufins ! :O

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Agh!!! i love it... poem after poem is forming in my head! im probably going to write them during english! talk to u tomorrow! love ya lots girly!

i love it !! as of right now, it's great!

thank you. i'm still trying to figure out somethings about it and there is going to be some twists.
let me know if i can do anything different or anything better.!

This is intresting. I've subscribed !