Okay, so haven't even really read it so far, but I figured I should update your language error.
You put in chapter 1: - “Merdi. ” Max gulped as thoughts of the blonde naked filled his mind, he hit Jordan on his back. -
When it should be "Merde" not "Merdi." I'm not telling you this to be mean (because re-reading this it sounds a bit condescending, which I apologize for) but just to update you so that you won't make this mistake again, that's all. You don't even have to change it, I'm just making you aware.