As You Held Onto Me - Comments

This was a really cute plot and I aboustly totally loved this story<3<3<3 Like, no joke ha ha
I also like how you mentioned things she did in the past

The cutest layout and cutest picture ever(:

This oneshot was definitely a surprise wrapped up very tightly. At the beginning, I was more than one hundred percent sure this was about some sweet romance between two kids that grew up together. But, when she started to cry and the mere mention about they being blood-related... I was mind blown. I didn't suspect a thing from the very beginning, and the ending was not enough to sate my need for answers. It leaves me hanging, wanting, thinking.

Simply... mesmerizing. The whole idea, the whole concept... let's not mention the way it was written. Hot damn. Stunning work, Za. Absolutely stunning.