Layout: I like the slightly subdued Summer colours. The layout seemed to work quite well with the story and was very easy to read.
Summary: Your summary is good. It doesn't give away too much information. It gives just enough to get the reader interested in the story. I found that I wanted to know what they did in the Summer.
Story: I liked the playful nature of the story and I felt that it complimented the picture wonderfully. I was able to imagine what they would have been doing throughout the story and I felt like I wanted to join in - Dinosaurs sounded fun!
Thankyou for your entry and I am extremely sorry for the lateness of my comment!
Summary: Your summary is good. It doesn't give away too much information. It gives just enough to get the reader interested in the story. I found that I wanted to know what they did in the Summer.
Story: I liked the playful nature of the story and I felt that it complimented the picture wonderfully. I was able to imagine what they would have been doing throughout the story and I felt like I wanted to join in - Dinosaurs sounded fun!
Thankyou for your entry and I am extremely sorry for the lateness of my comment!