Our Secret - Comments

  • flyer.

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    Awwww! This is so pretty, and it really fits with the picture. I can really feel the emotion...and the love between your characters. Nice job xD And I'm extremely jealous if you did draw this from real life experience :P
    October 4th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • lucky luciano

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    I love it! This is sooo cute! Only a few little mistakes/errors, but nothing to big! This was interesting to read, the layout is lovely, and I like the picture! There's really nothing else to say about this except that it is obvious that you are a very talented writer. BRAVO! I hope to read more of your stories soon!
    October 4th, 2010 at 02:39am
  • Blue Moon

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    This story is so cute. I hate how her parents ban her from seeing the man she loves.
    October 2nd, 2010 at 06:00pm
  • Sev4Rever

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    I love this, I was abotu to cry. :)
    October 1st, 2010 at 06:46am
  • ur_best_nightmare

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    I loved the story SOOO much. It was amazingly written and within one page, you brought tears to my eyes and let the reader know just how in love your two characters are. Very well done. :)
    October 1st, 2010 at 06:09am