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  • TheCoreysGirl

    TheCoreysGirl (200)

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    Wow! Very brilliant and creative, as well as very well-written, too. :)
    June 6th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • colour me perfect.

    colour me perfect. (100)

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    That was amazing. The emotions just... blew me away.

    Just a whole lot of questions that will never be answered....

    Arms Damn, I keep forgetting that that doesn't work here.

    Just remember, we'll have new memories next Christmas. Including a certain Mr Vengeance and a red bowtie xD
    October 9th, 2010 at 12:16pm
  • Glamophonic

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    This is so touching. I love the lost and alone feeling is has, it is so passionate, especially for just 121 words. It's so painful, and the fact that it is your own grandfather is also particularly touching. The wording is so simple, but it means so much. Like silk tea said, it was exquisite. I also love how the entire thing is all questions and nothing declarative. It's both moving and well composed. Wonderful job!
    September 16th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • silk tea.

    silk tea. (400)

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    God, this is so traumatic. The feeling and emotion in the words were just exquisite.
    I adored it and I feel that I need to hug you.
    September 13th, 2010 at 06:37pm