Adorable. It was so cute, but the whole time I wanted to slap the boy and tell him to just go for it! I loved the repetition and the time sequence. You might want to go back and add some spaces between some words. All in all, a good piece of literature. Good job. :]
shocks :'( that almost made me cry :)) a good filipino writer, indeed . hoping to read more stories from your profile but i hope it'll be love and no tragedy , but that would be boring. right ? ughh , well , good job :)