Insanity and Inspiration - Comments

This is good(: I like

This one was really well written and just as amazing as the others.
I felt like tearing up during this one and I can really explain exactly why I felt that way.
This was just wonderful though. You're a great writer.

I thought that this was written well and I liked the overall idea.
You have talent.
This just isn't a drabble, just a short story.
Drabbles are 500 words or less, and even that is stretching it.
Other than that well done.

Dude I ruined the prequel for myself now. D; This was really good though, beautiful, original, awesome. :]

This is amazing. I loved reading it. Made me want to cry. :')
Oh dear, now I see that it's a sequel.
Anyways, the only thing I saw wrong was a word in the summary. You used the word "forsaken" when you should have used just "forsake". That's all.
Good job. :D