Inject Me Sweetly - Comments

Yew updated :DYay. I just realized that the guy whose picture you used for Cody, yeah, I know him o-o xD Anyways.. Good chapter. :D I hate teachers.

i really like this so far!! :D
can't wait for more, please update soon!

i love the story, but i have a few things i think you should do to make it better. small things:

umm, first, when you write on word, if you do, then hit enter twice after you finish a paragraph because it's hard to readand my eyes get all jumbled up, maybe that's just me but...

and secondly, could you put in the chapter somewhere who's point of view it was? because I got really confuzzled because i thought the second chapter was in cody's point of view until cody showed up

uh yeah, just those two suggestions, but love the story, update soon?

So, at the beginning I was like "What the hell!? Ronnie's making a erotic novel!" Then I red on and found out that it was less like an eritoc novel and more like a slash. But if you write erotic novels as good as you wrote the first two chapters to a slash I think I might have to wear a condom while reading. Maybe I shouldn't put that on a comment......nope, to late, I'm not deleting it. And once again, I love it! Even if it is about people who could catch HIV or die of an overdose. But Cody uses protection and Braeden seems smart enough not to overdose. Then again smart people do sometimes seem like realy idiots. Like me and my spelling lately! But that is only if you consider me smart. Anyway, I'm going to stop with my babbling(which you know I'm good at) and just leave saying that I love this story. And yes, if it was a human I would totally have sex with it(that's how I know if I realy love something. If I would have sex with it.).

A very good start! I can't wait for the next update!!
XD

I'm having a feeling that he's going to see Cody again sometime. ;)

Perhaps as a boyfriend of some sort? ;)

It sucks about people doing that, though. I've never understood why people think it's the greatest thing on Earth to beat up gay people. I mean, really. What does it accomplish? >.>

I like this a lot so far :) hope you update soon

I like it a lot. :) Your description is really nice, which is unusual for a guy. :o But yeah, this could definitely be going somewhere. Just let me know when the next chapter is up and I'll comment that one, too. :)

Hmmm, well this has managed to grab, and hold, my attention. :D
I think I'll subscribe. ^-^

I like this, it's interesting so far update again good *subscribes* :D