loving this story, it's well written, some events are lacking in detail or explanation but it works with your writing style. looking forward to the next update =]
p.s Hedgehog? I WANT ONE! i have a few pets feel free to copy a name if you want, puppy named Hobo. Black cat named Dim-Sim. python named Om-Nom.and a rabbit named Hamster. lol good luck with finding a name =]