Love, Disgustingly - Comments

UGH THIS. <3

This is so beautiful I might cry. No wait, I think it's too late. Amazing job on this. And all your other stories that I've been lurking on but haven't commented on.

This is, by far, my favorite one shot. I love how you added a lot of detail. I also love how you made Mikey hate Gerard, so he won't love him. This is awesome, you're a great writer.

I adored this. I think that it actually works great as a standalone rather than as a prologue. It illustrates just one snapshot in their relationship and the letter format made it work even better. I like having the option to imagine what happened next. I think that Mikey tore the letter up before he could give it to Gerard. Anyways, you are amazing and I'm going to read more. <3

I loved it! It was so realistic, i hate waycests that aren't, and they feel it is normal or whatever? anyway, yeah I loved it! Please write more!:'}

Wow. I love this. You've captured Mikey's emotions so well. The right balance of bitterness and love.
It would work just as well as a prologue as it would a oneshot; whichever. I would, of course, love to read more. <3

This is amazing. You've described realistic emotions in Mikey's point of view.
This is the most awesome piece of writing I've seen in a little bit.

And in response to your post above, this would work great as a prologue if you had more ideas and wanted to continue. I would of course love to read more; but that's only if you feel up to it...

If not, then that's fine. This was an awesome story and I enjoyed it a lot! <3

Erh, well to be honest I had written it as a oneshot. You reckon it could be a prologue?

[sie=85]So, you know. I need goodwaycest like I need air. If you don't write more of this, I'll die.
Discontinue this story, if you're ready to have my death on your hands.
<3

I love this! I love the way you write Mikey's inner feelings, it's super sad and convincing. I love it Harleygirl xxxxxxxxx