This War Paint - Comments

i loved the update!!
awww poor jane! i bet it was a lie!!!
its so cute that she calls him Fraser!!
<3 more soon!

David Armstrong is a grade A asshole.Butch should pummel him!
I love Florence and Fraser,already there's such a sweet tenderness between them.Love it :)

Dude! This is unbelievably real and awesome. I like how you portrait them, I love where this story is heading. This is my absolute favorite from you. :)
p.s. Who is the guy in picture in the character section you selected as Butch? I want to google him so I can create a better picture in my mind. :)

tehehe he'd have to shit in a pan. =P so i have a friend at school whose name is David armstrong and he's quite a sweetie....nawwwww. just saying.
And now i wait in anticipation for the next one!!!!
can i just say i love your writing style...very clean. =D

Reallly like the story, looking forward to the next update!!!

And they finally speak to each other!! hooray! =]

I adore this story.
I don't read much on here anymore, because of many things, one being a severe lack of substance,
but this story is perfect.
The characters seem so real and and I never get bored reading it.
The only problem that I can see is that you spelled counselor wrong in the last chapter.

Congratulations, You've created a character that i can't wait to be see get his face punched in. Down with David Armstrong!! Go Fraser!! ...

more soon please

love it :D
more soon

Love the new update : ) This story is one of my favirote now , can't wait for the new chapter

Oh jeez, I just absolutely love this story.
The third chapter was a big gasp in my world, how could he just announce that?!
Anyways, awesome update

I feel like Jane might actually have a backbone. That's not to say that your other characters in your others stories don't have backbones....but well...they really don't. :] I loved this though. I'm so excited for it.

great chapter! hmm one of our close family friends has alzeihmers and it's so sad. cause we've known them for like the past seven years and it only started becoming real bad for the past year. great story though and i love your writing style, actually makes me wana keep reading. can't wait for the next one, good job hun =D

Hmm... I don't know if I like Jane yet. I always disliked "perfect" but I like how she also doesn't like it. Her tattoo seems sexy though haha! xP

LOVE THIS STORY. Already (:

Great chapter...it's so sad about her mom :(
Can't wait for more!

Love it.I love Jane.It's like the tattoo is a part of her that she can't express because of the town she lives in.Hopefully Butch will help :)

I really like Jane she seems so sweet but yet so strong. I can't wait to read more :)

I like Jane :D But I love butch more, even though i dont like that name XD

I love it!!!! You hooked me with your summary....please continue its so good! :) cant wait for updates