This War Paint - Comments

I really dislike David Armstrong and his father with a passion I can't even begin to understand or articulate with words.

I am ready to flip a shit. David Armstrong needs to die and I hate him for attempting to rape her. It feels horrible to be sexually assaulted. She needs to grow a damn backbone and leave him and be with Fraser because he can protect her and he's shown her how much he cares for her! Damn, this is rubbish. I really want to know what's going to happen next! Please, please, please!
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Ugh I hate that david kid he is no gud
Fraser why didnt u halo her stand up for the girl u love not walk off with a slut
Ur an idiot Fraser
Can't be gettin mad over a douchebag

I honestly loathe David , he's such a loser.
I hate how he thinks he can just destroy and rule Jane's life. He makes me sick
When Jane picked David (obviously not by choice) I almost cried.I really felt bad for Fraser :(

Come on, Jane. Bite! Get that bastard David off you! And come on Fraser... what's wrong?! You just stand there? Seriously, you can't see that Jane is begging for your help?! AAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH

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Sigh.
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More Soon Please!

I can't believe she didn't tell Fraser. I'm close to tears in frustration!
Also, I think she's pretty stupid to put reputation over everything. >:l

God that guy is such a creep!
Why can't he just leave them be!

Omj! (oh mu jmmy!) i love it! more please

I can't remember if I have ever commented on this story before, but if I haven't, I always meant to. :)
This is just a fantastic story and it's written so beautifully that I really cannot get enough of it.
I can't wait for the next chapter; I need to know how Jane feels after kissing Fraser.

I love your long chapters. And everything else you do in your writing, I had been waiting for that kiss for so long, and it was just perfect. I just hope that he remembers what she said when he sees that she is dating the other asshole. Your writing is absolutely amazing, you deliver every single emotion to perfection.

Aww poor Fraser , he thinks Jane regrets kissing him. Silly boy :)
I love Jane , she's too damn sweet.

That was a deep chapter. I love it

F I N A L L Y , Butch got some! c;
Ugh, he's so adorable. I don't understand.
Your writing is so amazingly spectacular, I've fallen in love and I never want to fall out c:
Please update soon!

Poor Butch :[

I think I love Fraser even more now! I'm waiting for you to write a story where the girl is the badass and not the boy, that'd be such a cute story.
Anyway, I enjoyed reading this chapter thoroughly. The intense passion of the kiss was hard to miss, Fraser's mind was being unraveled even more with this chapter. His heart must've shattered into millions of delicate tiny pieces after the words she uttered. Fraser is the MAN.

They kissed and I was all, "Finally! *sigh of relief*" and then I finished the chapter and I still just want to hug Fraser till Jane comes to her senses. All of your stories stress me out in the most wonderful sense of the way. :)

Keep on keeping on.

They finally kissed :D
Tho it made me sad when Jane pulled away from Frasier and told him that she was sorry :(
It broke my heart that Frasier is sad, but I think that Jane is just scared of what she's feeling for him.
Hopefully soon they can tell each other how they feel about each other :D
Great update

I'm sorry I have yet to comment,
I absolutely love this.
It isn't like most where after like 4 chapters they are making out.
I love the slow pace even if I'm not very patient.
I really like this:)
There is nothing wrong with this story at all.
I wish you'd update sooner though.
:)

That kiss!!
But poor Fraser!!!
She does love you Fraser!!

hey, it was totally worth the wait. for real. and i knew that fraser had enough sense that he wouldn't push her into anything. but hey, that was just my opinion! great chapter. lots of love <3