You have so much power in so little words. Because there are so few words, I can't say what my favorite part is, because I love this whole piece of writing. It's such a masterpiece. You are definitely going somewhere with your writing. Amazing job, like always! I hope to read more of your beautiful pieces soon enough. :]
I feel like these could be song lyrics or something. Song lyrics always have a meaning other than the words that are sung, and this has some spark hidden beneath the words on the screen. I like it a lot.
It was so short. Like, really. But I mean those 28 words meant so f*ckin' much, dude. How did you do it?! Really good job, so powerful and meaningful. It was full of emotions and you potrayed the 28 small words so well.
Dru, marry me. Just marry me. For something that is only 28 words, it speaks in massive volumes. I felt oddly satisfied after reading it. It was, as always, beautiful. And I think, a great show to your development as a writer. To get all these emotions out in twenty-eight frackin' words. You're just an amazing writer.
Amazing job, like always!
I hope to read more of your beautiful pieces soon enough. :]