Second Chances - Comments

Ready for another epically long comment? Good cause here it comes....<333

I am intrigued. And may I say the best part of this was Danny? You're
tugging at my heartstrings with that kid and I've only read a small bit
about him thus far.

The banter between the boys was funny as hell, but they amuse me just
by being who they are and the fact Brian was called an asshat, oh you
had my heart right then and there.

I hope Janey can stand her ground and be strong sounds like she gonna
need it depending upon which of Gates alter egos appears. And this is
wishful hoping on my part but I hope Michelle either gets dumped or
gets her ass beat to oblivion. Yes I'm evil, nope don't care.

Finally someone portrays that skank for the gold digging cheating whore
that she is. Man I hope I'm right about you and you do something sadistic
to that cunt!

Mikki seems like a really good friend but a smidgen of me wonders if
getting Janey drawn into this soon to be snakepit of drama is going to
bode well for her. Esp considering there are feelings still present.

And Danny, you've managed to make me fall even more in love with him. I
hope he contiues to be okay in the story, because he makes me smile.

One part confused me. When val was there asking if Brian was coming
home? Does he not live in HB or did I miss something.

And hell yes the cunt got what was coming to her even tho I'd have been
hard pressed to stop at one blow hurt hand or not! I just hope that's
the last I hear about her. Not a fan, can you tell?

I gotta say I think J and B are moving a little too fast. Or at least B
is. Just because the love is still there doesn't mean the past will be
forgotten, but hey that's just me I can hold one hell of a grudge.

This is so sweet, funny and hilarious at the same time. I giggled the
way they ALL gossiped about one another. I guess nothing is sacred with
that bunch.

It was sad Janey had to miss Thanksgiving to work but it shows her care
and dedication to her work and patients. If only all nurses were like
that.

I'm glad J and B didn't go all the way. I mean I get that they still
love each other and had the potatoes not burned it would have most
likely gone a lot farther but I think its too soon. They both may think
they are ready but I think there's still some things to be discussed.
Not sure they will wait much longer but I'm still glad things seem to
be telling them not yet.

Well you managed to make me cry. I had a feeling Danny wasn't going to
make it but I has hoped I was wrong.

Man this is all kinds of fucked up. The fact Brian wanted to pisses me
off, even if he didn't actually go thru with it.

And poor Janey, she's probably more than devastated over losing Danny.
Even tho I got that gut feeling again that drama shall ensue thanks to
asshat I'm glad she has a solid support system in everyone else.

I had what I wanted to say all planned out until I got to the HIM
part...bwhahahahahahah Ville was my first fan fic love so the fact I'm
reading about him in an A7X fic made me grin from ear to ear.

Awwww that really was one of the sweetest things I've seen done for
someone in a fic thus far.

I loved it when Matt and Brian went at it. Like two rabid wolves.
Sometimes I wonder about Matts feelings for J but I know he's just
protective of her.

I do sort of agree that I'm on the fence whether I want things to work
out for them. Bri's had quite a few fucks ups and even with their long
history I'm not sure he deserves Janey. Did I just say that? Hehe

Man that was so sweet. I'm sort of giddy they got to relive an old
Christmas tradition. But who knows maybe the third time will be the
charm for these two. Although I've got a nagging suspicion that
application to PCH is going to rear its ugly head at a most inopportune
time and make Bri doing something idiotic again. I hope I'm wrong about
that....

Damn these two are like rabbits going at each other night and day. Damn
how is Janey even able to walk?

Jimmy as an Elf! LMAO that is so something I could see him doing too,
even with his tall lanky frame he would have been wonderful because he
was Jimmy.

Zack in a Princess dress? I don't want the mental image of that much
less the reason behind it.

I knew those papers would come back into play at some point. I will say
I think Brian overreacted about them, considering they were in fact
blank. And I think if Janey had really wanted that position she
wouldn't have forgotten about them and that says a a lot about how much
she does want this to be with the ass hat.

Why does everyone always pick on poor Johnny? One of these days that
man is going to loose all control and get them all back! Wait this is
fiction. Damn look at what you've done to me.

Janey was absolutely amazing in that interview and I'm so happy she got
the position with PCH. I can't wait to see how she juggles her career
and the relationship with Brian, but I do have faith she will be able
to do so. I only hope Haner is too, I know he's come a long way since
winning her back again but little Brian seems to be insatiable.

Sort of sad this has come to an end, but I really enjoyed reading it. I
mean I must have to have finished it in 24 hours, eh?

I think everything was wrapped up in a nice pretty bow and I'm glad Bri
turned out to be the man Janey deserved. I was a tad put off when Jimmy
was the only one present at the wedding but I suppose Matt being so
over protective of Janey was too much for the couple to handle. Still
it was sad, they've all been such a solid unit I feel they got cheated,
even if the couple knew it would get out of hand.

I was surprised and then not when Janey's dream job didn't work out. I
used to work with a GI doctor with the same mindset and the one Janey
dealt with and though it was an ideal job I could only take so much.
Besides with her now a wife she needed to be back in HB it's where she
belongs.

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Aww the ending is wonderful. I can't wait to start reading the sequel.. wee :'D

Loved it!
*runs off to read sequel*
<3

i loved it! the perfect ending!

i knew it! i knew it knew it knew it!!!!! :D I FEEL SMART!!! okie back on serious note: WHAT. THE. FUCK! YOU CANT END A STORY LIKE THAT!!! IT DOESNT WORK OUT! NO! SEQUEL! NOW! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AWE YAY<3
Squeal! :3

YAY they finally tied the knot and now they are officially husband and wife! XD
I am so happy that they were able to finally get married!
And her wedding dress is very beautiful!!!!
I wonder what they are hiding from their friends that makes Janey guilty about it?
And yes she is moving back to Cali!!!
Thank god for the stuck up doctor for driving Janey to come back home!
And the message that Val left is very frustrating because I want to know what she means by what she said.
I can't wait for the first chapter to be out!!!!!!!!!!!

I absolutely loved this fucking story! Gosh you are such an amazing writer and I cannot wait until the sequel's out! bravo!

Hahaha Brian and Jimmy crack me up. Only Jimmy would hide the rings in Leana's boobs XD. Man they are in trouble when they come back from their oh so lovely honeymoon (;. The last sentence reminded me of 'I love Lucy' so much!!!! LOL

Great amazing story hun<3 Can't wait for the sequal.

Sequel, sequel, sequel! *enthusiastic Jersey Shore fist pump*
Oh my goodness, I have to admit that at first I thought Janey was pregnant. I never would have guessed that the two of them would have a private wedding! That was a very pleasant surprise. I was also very pleased with the fact that Janey doesn't like it at her new job. Get your ass back to your man, woman! *shakes fist*
I've enjoyed reading this story, and the ending made me laugh so hard. I thought it was going to be sad for me, like I would cry or something, but you made the ending really uplifting. I liked that.
I'm so pumped for that sequel. Whoot! :)
Loved it lady. Wonderful job! <3

omg i loved it!!!!!!!!!
im so jelous that you get to go to london, and see avenged!!!

askldfjgldkgjg. That was such a cute fucking ending. My life has been made. :)
That was seriously the cutest and most unique way of asking someone to marry them. Awww, I'm still awwing over that. This story has been absolutely amazing, and I can't even be sad that it's over because I'm stoked over the next one. xD
Have fun at Avenged love. :) xo

This was absolutely the best story ever. It was so real, and so emotional. I loved it! I hope you write something else, because I really really want to read it. [:

aww that was so cute <3 i loved this chapter lookin forward to the sequel!!!!!!!

Awww how sweet<3 Brian was so freaking nervous XD but it all paid off :D Now time for planning a wedding (; Hehehe.

Ahhhh-mazing job! I loved it and I really can't wait for more (:

Awwww what a sweet way to propose to her! X3
He finally got the guts to propose to her!!!!!
Now she can be officially his when she gets back from Phoenix!
Brian is so adorable!
Setting that up for her and making sure she sees that he loves her.
I look forward to the epilogue!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN AND I LOOK FORWARD TO THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Loved it hun :) xx

Short shit really wants a painful death doesn't he? Hehe peachbutt XD I started laughing at the nickname. Wow I think when she leaves there will be a lot of tears...from everyone but mostly Brian....so sad. But knowing you something terrific is going to happen at the end to make us happy and not sad about Janey leaving (;

Great job! I really loved it and I cannot wait for more ^___^

Wow so she wants to stay but Brian wants her to explore her options in the career department.
She would totally stay for him and did you say that this story is going to have a sequel?
Brian will never let Janey leave the bedroom even if it means she will miss her flight to Phoenix.
OMG Johnny is so funny, having the urge to bite her bum because of the shorts she was wearing.
Not to mention the others came to see it.
Good thing Brian was there to chase them off.
Now everyone in the gang knows about Johnny's story about Janey bum.
Cool nickname, peachbum!!!! XD
Update soon again!!!!!!!!!!!!!

peach butt? lol i have a necklace and bracelet like that