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  • LaurenXPlague

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    I love this story(:
    March 23rd, 2011 at 01:51am
  • Klarque

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    Love it, is all i can say lol
    -Crizz
    March 8th, 2011 at 06:52pm
  • xXcrazy-desiXx

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    ooooooooooooooooooooooooo there going to get in truble but anywho i love it
    November 12th, 2010 at 05:57am
  • violetriddle

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    uh oh
    She did drugs
    Don't let her get hooked
    PLEASE DON'T LET HER GET HOOKED!!!!
    Actually
    Do whatever the fuck you want to do with this story
    IT'S YOURS!!!!!!!
    November 3rd, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • narc0tics!

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    ohhhhhhhhhhh is this going to be a jimmyyyy ylooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeee sssssssssttttttttttooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyy??????
    November 3rd, 2010 at 02:34am
  • violetriddle

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    Meow?
    November 3rd, 2010 at 01:11am
  • violetriddle

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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 31st, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • Poison.The.Hero

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    really really really good just need to be longer
    September 27th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Likin it so far :D
    Can't wait for more <33
    September 17th, 2010 at 04:02am
  • cr!zpylovesall

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    i like it
    September 16th, 2010 at 11:57am
  • Audioblue

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    Okay, I have to suggest a few things.

    First, try getting a beta. I only read the summary and caught a lot of mistakes, lack of punctuation, and so on. Also, change the layout. The font makes it impossible to read, and the brightness makes my eyes hurt. Try simple colors like black and white and gray, don't use bright colors.

    I'd like to read this, it just needs a little work. :D
    September 16th, 2010 at 05:33am
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