Dear Diary - Comments

  • TheCoreysGirl

    TheCoreysGirl (200)

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    This is a really good story so far, and very realistic, as bullying definitely shouldn't be a part of life (even though most people think it is). However, I noticed that there were some mistakes that could be corrected (such as the word "classmates" missing an "s" and being split into two words). (Just constructive criticism here.)
    Anyway, great story so far. :)
    April 16th, 2011 at 08:05am