Blood Red Memories - Comments

Hello! Oh my goodness, I love the way you're set up the first chapter. The intensity with the screams and the readers are asking right away what the heck is going on? Especially when there's a sense of routine the normal thing about her screams. Which in fact creates a sense of mystery not only with the main character but with the gentleman at the end. Good job! :)

I just found your story and am already hooked. I've tended to drift away from Mibba in recent months because of an influx of writers who's style makes me cringe. But, yours I enjoy quite a bit. I love how you write your characters without cheesiness and make them feel real, while also staying true to the story. Also, I adore the plot you have devised.

Simply put, I'm subscribing. And, although I can't wait for more of the story and would love if you posting the next chapter ASAP, I always tell writers to write at their own pace because life can be hell at times (as you have experienced) and writing can go on the back burner.
Best Wishes to You!

P.S. I really don't see anything wrong with the background.

/raises hand
I'm one of your subscribers, although I don't usually log in to my account to read. XD
I actually like the background, though. Please continue writing~ I'm in love with your plot and characters. <3

Yeah, I have to agree that the back ground is a bit hard to look at and the red print is pretty hard to read etc. etc.
But, hey. You listen hear this is nowhere near a bad story! Don't let a single person on this site tell you any different. I'm addicting to the plot and the writing style itself.
I'm absolutely subscribing, and if you need help with anything writing related' you know where I'm at. lol

Can't wait for your next update. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

The background image makes this story very hard to read. Maybe you should change it around a little. And so does the red, it makes it really hard.

The summary makes me yawn, I must admit. It sounds boring and just, eh. The first chapter though, it's alright.

I love the way you write and describe everything. That's brilliant and makes me want to continue this but then I just get bored.

I'm sorry but this story is really unappealing.

what happens? write more your a very talented writer

Yes you did!!bMORE! Hahaha Awww, what're they gonna do to Garra?! :0

Hahahaha why must you torture me with cliffhangers? :0 moooorree!!!

Sorry for the late reply... But:
I am SUPER flattered. Really, I mean it. ^^
I'll try to get back to writing ASAP. Unfortunately I can't make any guarantees because I'm so busy right now with college applications. It sucks. :(
Anyway, I just wanted to say thanks for the comment and that it made me smile and stuff :)))

MOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)