NOM! tbh, *snickers* in the layout page *snickers* Jimmy and ack make me laugh because of how young and weird they look, *full blown out laughter* xx update soon =P
yay!!!!! updates!!!!! more!!!!! read more no wait, update soon haha x i should really subscribe, but im lazy so i wont, and just keep checking everday and hour to maketo see if its been updated =D
Um.. Ok, so, you really need to edit before you post. Names need to be capitalized, and so do the beginnings of new sentences. I also think you should slow the story down a bit, it's moving super fast and it's kinda all over the place. Also, it's really annoying when authors add a billion extra letters to words in their storys, use italics or something to emphasize a point, don't just say "I am sooooooooooooo gonna kill her!" Other than that, good story
its soooooo interesting!