All I can say is I love the connection to Siddhartha. I think his whole background resembles you so much! Tired of rituals that he doesn't believe in, setting out on a journey for the self, to find what he truly loves in life I feel like that is what you truly need :3
Oh and to add, I LVOED CHAPTER 5!!! I was wondering, is bryan taller or shorter than you, becasue if he was resting his head there, would he need to shouch or are you taller?
Ohhhhh, I really like this, I could use dialoge, and maybe sme more detail, But i really like the way you wrote it, and how you signed your name off in the end, I might to that to mine, xD good job, oh and if you wanna read my new peice, here it is SUBCRIBE----COMMENT----READ!!! Thanks! http://stories.mibba.com/read/319232/Stranded/1