Drowning - Comments

storystereo (100)

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Like. =D

December 12th, 2010 at 03:22am

Cynder (100)

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i got shivers too, thats a good sign, you made the reader feel sompthing =)

November 10th, 2010 at 10:24pm

X.:icy_chick:.X (100)

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ohwow. that was amazing, it gave me shivers.

November 10th, 2010 at 12:36am

Cascade (100)

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I think this is great! It tells the reader so much with just 100 words and it shows a lot of emotions. It tells us the feelings of the girl and her thoughts, which is always good and informative. Lots of detail, too. Good work! :)

October 25th, 2010 at 12:16am

Creative Username (100)

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I really like it!

September 19th, 2010 at 03:19am