Just Like Lucy Wanted - Comments

That was incredible.
I don't know how to explain it.
just wow. You really know how to get the reader to feel for the character and the situation.
Good job.

Chills down my spine! I'm think I'm going to take a minute and hope that this never happens in real life even though it is most likely does. Wow, that was creepy!

This was SO FREAKY! omgosh I loved it! So REAL! *shudders* I like your style of writing :) i didn't see any mistakes, so kudos to you for that! Well, this was, again, one of the best one-shots that I have EVER read on mibba! I love the layout and the banner, the title, I love EVERYTHING about this story! BRAVO!

WHOA.
That was not at all what I was expecting. Thank you for having that ending sneak up on me.
At first I was like "oh, poor girl, she's so alone" and then "OHMYGOD WHAT IS SHE DOING."
No, but really, this was brilliant. You managed to fit a whole range of emotions - sadness, loneliness, anger, frustration - into such a small story.
It was beautifully written and, like I said, it definitely got a reaction out of me.
Also random but the picture you used was really beautiful and eerie.

It started with the hair, and it ended in a bloody mess.
*shudders* You're quite an amazing writer. I'm serious.

That must of hurt.
Suicide...what a foolish way to get revenge.
This was strange, and the last line of this was very chilling.
Just what she wanted.--guess she'll get her revenge.

You should spread this out a little bit better but other then that this was awesome.
Your choice of words were so harsh but it all worked so well together!
It was chilling and lovely at the same time.
Well done. <3

That was amazing. I really liked how morbid it was at the end, though it was almost poetic.
Your writing is beautiful. <3
I also really liked how it started with the hair and ended with her death, and how the picture fit perfectly.
Good job!. :D

This made me shudder while I was reading several times, because it was so harsh.
Which is a good thing.
Because your words were strong enough to make it happen(:
It was short, but I feel like you really got your message through with this.
I loved how you ended it with those last three lines.
Great job<3

That was awesome. So morbid and wonderful. I loved every minute of it. It was amazing really :]

OH. This was weird! But I liked it. I really did.
I'm subscribing.
Cannot wait till the next chapter.

Wow, that was a tad morbid
but! I loved it all the same.
It gave me shivers and I swear my eyes practicaly popped out when she started cutting her skin.
I really like the photo too, by the way.
And this might be weird, but I really like the name Lucy, it seemed to fit for some reason.
Beautifully written it was <3

Dude, this was freaking bone chilling. It was just -- eerie. In a good way, though. I loved the layout by the way, simple yet -- chic, I guess. :)