September 21st, 2010 at 09:25am
Goodness; That is amazing. I love it, just like Nezzy said. GREAT cliffhanger. I really, really wanna know what he did to her that was so terrible she'd want to kill him, or is she killing him?
Is she just a crazy loon?
Or what?
So many questions..
Once the contest is over, will you write more? [x
xD
That was SO GOOD. Yes, caps was necessary.
I've found myself liking dark things lately, and with the cliff hanger it's just awesome.
I love how you used the word "darling". It almost makes it seem even mare dark and kind of twisted. xD
I really liked the layout too. Skinny layouts have always seemed cooler to me.
Awesome job. :D