I like shorter chapters anyone as they keep the flow of the story going. With a story like this, you have to be careful about droning on too much. It's fast paced and totally addictive; gimme more!
January 6th, 2008 at 02:46am
Bullets Before Bedtime - Comments
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I absolutely adore vampire stories and this is ticking all my boxes so far mate. I've just finished chapter 2. I love the names of the vampire cult gang and the imagery you'e already created within these first two chapters is excellent. A few minor spelling mistakes, but other than that a triumph so far. Looking forward to reading the rest now.January 6th, 2008 at 02:42am
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okay I swear I will tell you the things I noticed very soon, when I'm done walking Basil.
and yay for the name! and the pissy teenage atitude!January 6th, 2008 at 02:41am -
sort of creepy.....
but unbelievably WONSDERFUL!!!!!January 5th, 2008 at 07:47am -
wow. this sounds VERY good. update soon please:)January 4th, 2008 at 01:17pm
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you're my hero darling! that was very great! a couple of slight grammer-ish mistakes but whatever, the whole thing was fantastic!January 4th, 2008 at 12:29pm
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that's much better already then the first draft! Great job!January 4th, 2008 at 12:22pm
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This is good and I like the storyline, from what I got from the summary.
Can't wait for the next update!
Sarah xoxoJanuary 4th, 2008 at 06:32am
