Believing in Love - Comments

I absolutely loved it! This is one of those stories that you get really wrapped up in. I'm so happy they worked things out.

I really liked this, I'm sad to say that I read it a while ago but I didn't comment on it but now I literally stumbled upon it again and I couldn't not comment.
I loved it all, and the Pens girl in me is really happy how you managed to tie them into it too =D
A great one-shot, really well written and of course Jack Johnson is amazingly cute so that doesn't really hurt either ;)

It was really well written
good luck
:)

I really liked this. I figured you'd find a way to have the Pens show up in this :P Good luck with the contest! :)

I love Jack Johnson, and this one-shot.
It was so well written, and I absolutely loved it.
Good job! <3

Great Job, and I think the length is perfect. Nice choice of names for the OC too.
Way to pull Pens into your Kings story. You know how those boys make me happy.
I really like Jack too.
Good luck with the contest!!!!

Best one yet. I loved it from start to finish. amazing job girl

Awesome! i think you did a lot of justice showing the struggle with trust and working through it, plus managing children. This was well written and captivating. I really hope you win.