Damned. - Comments

  • spencer hastings.

    spencer hastings. (350)

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    This is amazing! I love your writing style. It's like I can see the whole story playing out in my mind. Very nice job! Can't wait to read more! :]
    September 25th, 2010 at 03:37pm
  • Lover of Polka Dots

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    Simply fantastic! It was really good. I especially love the last line!

    My only critique is here--> "It was either going through another grueling process of therapy sessions, or just drop their son off and wait till he appeared, cured again. They chose the ladder." It's supposed to be latter.
    September 25th, 2010 at 03:35pm
  • Famous Friend.

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    Wow, that was amazing!
    I loved the way you wrote it, it was perfect and very detailed.
    September 25th, 2010 at 07:04am
  • Bucky.Barnes

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    That was very well written =)
    I enjoyed it.
    I wonder who's next i don't remember lol >.<
    September 25th, 2010 at 07:02am