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  • Katelyn23

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    This was really good... and creepy. I like how even at the end not everything is answered. Johnny's thoughts were still funny even in the situation that he was in, especially the pony one!
    October 4th, 2010 at 06:06am
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    I don't normally like fanfiction. The layout is a little distracting and I wish there were more detail but other than that I liked it. What you had was well written and well structured. I really liked the story and am glad I knew who the people you were writing about are. I often find stories where I have no clue who the people are. This was very good. :]
    September 24th, 2010 at 07:07am
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