and I'm quite amazed that I'm the first to comment considering how beautiful this is.
October 1st, 2010 at 06:44pm
I’ve never been a fan of stories whose backgrounds are transparent, but yours was just the opposite. The colors are so pretty. Now I’ve never been a big fan of red but I think you found the precise shade of red that I cannot say is ugly, it’s pretty.
I love how simple yet very sexy this is. The words seem to flow is just the right rhythm and they have this certain feeling. Like it’s forbidden yet you can’t say no? I think your word choice is excellent; I can really get into the story.
I love the ending, how they’re keeping their routine going, but without the masks. “Making it real.” I’ve never read a story like this before, it was different and unique and utterly beautiful.
I think you did a great job.