Made To Leave You - Comments

This is amazing. I wish you would continue.... :)

honestly, you're gonna leave us all hanging with the last chapter?

an update would be lovely. need it soon. i'm dying :|

This is really interesting. I love how you began with the twins mothers death and then forwarded in time for their birth. I can't wait to see where this story goes next, update soon!

You had me from the picture. I don't know why, I just was kind of drawn to the story from the get go.

The first chapter - Oh lord, it's so sad! I think I cried. The second is just... wow. You really know how to write, don't you?
You define your characters so well, like they're all real.

I just..wow. You are way beyond me in writing.
Great job!

... Wow. Originally I was only going to read the prologue as the swap was with a one-shot, but I ended up reading all of it. Holy shizz. This is amazing. Right from this line I knew you were one of the best authors I've ever had the pleasure of meeting on Mibba:

She was a femme fatale Lolita wrapped in sunshine, spritzed in Love's Baby Soft, and stretching her Lacoste polo to the limit.

That line right there ... it told me this was going to be brilliant and I was right. This is seriousy powerful stuff and you should be so proud. It's not cliché, your characters aren't the typical rich girls and they're already so well-rounded and developed. I'm definitey subscribing, because this is beautiful. Great job! <3

This is really emotional, it really got to me and that clearly shows your writing skill. Although at times I feel you rely on speech mote than description I still loved this.:)

Wow. This is just.... No words to describe. I kind of love this. A ton. Totally subscribing. You are a really good writer btw haha. Just in case you didn't know:)

Oh wow, seriously.
Just starting off with the prologue it's already heartbreaking, the fact that I love the name Sloane aside- this was beautiful. I mean, seriously. Not only was is just... so sad all in all, with the babies dying, but the way that you captured everything, I could really empathize for the kid. I mean, he worked just so damn hard for those babies, and then how he couldn't believe she was dead.
:/
And then it just gets even more sad knowing that he throws himself into work non-stop because he misses the chick. But I do like how it's sort of... relatable, in a sense. That she doesn't want to put out except her boyfriend wants her to and that sort of thing.
Rynn oddly enough, is my favourite. I'm not sure why but I'm always drawn to the fuckups, for some reason. They're just so much more interesting than the rest of them, I find.
:3

AND THEN YOU JUST LEAVE OFF ALL SCARY LIKE.
Man, I'm definitely subscribing, this is a great story! :D

Wow.
This is seriously good.
I really love the summary - that was my favorite part, I think.

OO SHINY I love this it is sooo creative! I love everything you have going for it right now :D The set up, how extremely long your chapters are >_> Good thing I'm a fast reader =P. You have an amazing writing talent!

I was pulled in back during the summary. "This is not a love story" really got to me, because a majority of Mibba's stories are romances and it's good to see something new every once and a while. I loved the first chapter, it nearly made me cry. You write with such good emotion and I love your writing style. I can't wait to see where these goes and how much more Cora and Rynn's characters develop. <3

I gobbled up the first chapter and then repeated the action with the second. I'm really betting that her drink was drugged. Hmm... Could it have been Asher? UPDATE!!!

I LOVE IT!
And I already told you this but a cliffy is bad! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

I don't know, but you sure as hell dragged me into the story with the summary. The whole This is not a love story really hooked me. And once I read the prologue, I was crying. I mean, that's just so sad, and it broke my heart to see him trying to convince himself and the nurse that she was only sleeping.

Now, I can't wait to see what is going to happen between Cora and her sister. I'm still reading chapters 1 & 2, but i wanted to let you know that you have some hardcore talent, missy <3

Every time I see or hear The Strokes, I always think about a group of old people having strokes.

Every time I read Cora I think of Cora's and this makes me happy inside.

Dinosaur vomit comment. I love you [and this story] though <33

Gosh, and that my friend is a classic case of being spiked xD
But in this case, a knight came to rescue her, happens in like 0.01% of cases. So she's lucky there.
Slight feeling that I know who it is, but then, I don't blame him much....but yeah, still not the best thing to do.
So yeahh, really liked that chapter a lot. xD

Who drugged Cora and why did they drug her? I would hate for it to be Asher really.
Wonderfully written, once again doll!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Great update! I loved getting to know Rynn a little better, even if she is a super crazy person that I would never hang out with. lol I don't think you could make them more contrasting if you tried! Wow! And poor Cora... I was mentally urging her up the stairs as I read. I wanted to just climb in the story and drag her up the stairs myself! lol
Terrific update!

:D
- Emily

Another wonderful update. <3
I loved the part where she was climbing the stairs. It's an odd part to like, but it was my favorite. x) All because of how you wrote it. I was cheering her on in my mind the whole time. :)
Can't wait for more. <3

I loved it.

Really.

The content was awesome and the layout was beautiful.

(: