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  • merance

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    Very nice; please continue it?
    July 5th, 2008 at 02:53am
  • ArghScaryMonsters!

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    OMG!
    What gonna happen?

    Continue! I love it! x]
    July 1st, 2008 at 12:04am
  • Save My Soul

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    Was her birth defects a change? I can't remember. I think so.
    Yes, it was a change.
    June 30th, 2008 at 11:06pm
  • le bonheur

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    Awe i like this more soon?
    June 30th, 2008 at 11:04pm
  • Faitily;Yours

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    :) can't wait to see more. I wanna know what happens! And I also want to see your changes.

    Was her birth defects a change? I can't remember. I think so.
    June 30th, 2008 at 10:28pm
  • Dorian Gray

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    This story is really good! :D
    So cute In Love
    June 30th, 2008 at 09:51pm
  • AFineFrenzy

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    -New Reader-

    Hey there, Bye

    I love this so far.

    It's so good! And it's such a great first chapter because it drops all these little things where you want to know what happens so you'll keep reading. Twas very very good.

    More soon please!
    :mrgreen:
    June 30th, 2008 at 09:27pm
  • Death By Dance

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    Okay, I've got Three words: WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK?!?! oh... wait that's four... o.O Shit, that's *counts* eight... Grrr... *FAIL*
    June 30th, 2008 at 09:26pm
  • Angelus.

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    YAY great first chapter! I don't know if you rewrote or what, but it was really well written, and I loved it =)

    more soon! :arms:

    xoxoxoxoxoxox
    June 30th, 2008 at 09:25pm
  • Alice Verney

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    poor gee this looks amazing so far
    June 30th, 2008 at 09:20pm
  • Broken

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    of course i'll stay with the story. i look forward to reading the new chapters
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:02am
  • Angelus.

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    Awesome, can't wait for it to start again =)

    xoxox
    June 28th, 2008 at 03:02pm
  • music is life

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    Well, I'm not reading the story until it's finished, so...

    But, YAY! I loce Shatter the Calm. She's amazing. :)
    June 28th, 2008 at 07:52am
  • Faitily;Yours

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    Hello my dearest. I would LOVE to see more of this, such an interesting concept ^_^

    I have seen it before, but not this heartwrenching.

    LOVES! and subscribes..AND friend add...cus you asked XD

    lol

    -Meggy
    June 8th, 2008 at 09:03am
  • we are invincible.

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    -hits comment button-
    BADASS.
    May 20th, 2008 at 08:36am
  • E. Van Dahl

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    I love it!
    =]
    May 16th, 2008 at 01:27am
  • ALoserWithStyle

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    I LOVE MPREG!
    And this one in-per -ick. :tehe:
    I especially like how you start with the prologue and then go on with the story.
    The situation is portrayed very well. I can almost imagine being there.
    GREAT WORK! :D
    April 22nd, 2008 at 02:27pm
  • Kristen Stewart

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    this is just amazing and really sad more soon! xx
    April 19th, 2008 at 02:41pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    great update

    More when you can plz!!!
    April 7th, 2008 at 07:36pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    Awww... normally I'd say, "poor Frankie".... but I can't.
    All he has to do is FORGIVE HIMSELF. He can't expect Gerard to forgive him if he doesn't forgive himself first. Then he can go to Gerard and then... be with him to help him with their baby!

    AWW, it's adorable.
    I love it so far :arms:
    April 4th, 2008 at 03:24am
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