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  • WarDrums

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    *gasp* thats not the end right??? it was a brilliant chapter!!! loved all the emotion flying around everywhere!
    May 9th, 2011 at 07:38pm
  • cindycannibal

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    is that the end? it better not cuz i love this story
    May 7th, 2011 at 09:09am
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    bomb bomb bomb lol
    May 6th, 2011 at 01:06am
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    wow....dramatic ending =) but written in a calm way...loved it
    May 5th, 2011 at 09:07pm
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    yes cant wait for the next chapter
    May 3rd, 2011 at 01:09am
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    haha bombs.
    April 30th, 2011 at 09:18am
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    whoo! Bombs!!! Cant wait =P

    excellent chapter =)
    April 28th, 2011 at 09:10pm
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    my favorite paul digiovanni story. im glad that her dad is getting along with paul
    April 27th, 2011 at 08:18am
  • cindycannibal

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    more chapters please
    April 26th, 2011 at 01:05am
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    sweet
    more chapters please
    April 24th, 2011 at 02:47pm
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    yay the meeting went well!! *claps*

    awesome chapter!
    April 21st, 2011 at 08:58pm
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    awww =) cute chapter
    April 20th, 2011 at 07:26pm
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    i knew it i knew it i knew it (: *little dance* haha anyway this is really good and I can't wait to see waht happens next :p
    BAD MARTIN!
    April 20th, 2011 at 04:37am
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    *claps* yay the dad's going to help paul! atleast i hope so...

    brilliant chapter =) it's quite funny that both rowan's dad and martin are weary of rowan and paul but rowan and paul are so sure they can trust each other =)
    April 19th, 2011 at 06:37pm
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    terrible handwriting?? awww

    lol, brilliant chapter, love the relationship between paul and rowan...it's so sadly adorable =)
    April 13th, 2011 at 10:48pm
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    I'm seriously getting sucked into this storyline.

    He passes out!?!?!? Oh I see you're just gonna leave me hanging. That's cool. *evil stare*

    ...and he had to jump out of a window. Do I want to know? Actually I do because that sounds all kinds of badass.

    Oooooh oh oh He gave her a nickname. He called her Ro. I don't remember if he's called her that before but I noticed it now. Aaaaw.

    oh I also like how he just appears out of no where and that you keep on bringing up this whole bromance.

    Anyways....yeah I think that's it. :)

    Update soon!
    April 13th, 2011 at 05:26am
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    ' “Of course she feels the same! She’s practically surgically attached to your dick,” Paul said, rolling his eyes. '

    I laughed. A lot.
    You are such a wonderful writer asjdjsdfkj I can't even <3
    April 12th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • kill your friends;

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    2 words. Holy. Shit.
    This is seriously one of the coolest stories i have read! I love how they had to kidnap her and even though paul denies it he is SO falling for her! haha anyway cant wait till the next update!
    April 11th, 2011 at 09:52pm
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    ooohhh drama! love it!
    April 11th, 2011 at 09:38pm
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    oh my god I'm so behind on this askdksdkf
    okay so I just read like, 7 chapters right now and
    I'M IN LOVE.
    OKAY.
    sjskdkskd Paul and Rowan and the sexual tension and the fact that they hate each other and Martin's little sarcastic comments IT'S ALL SO PERF.
    <3
    April 10th, 2011 at 11:59pm
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