I know what you mean. Mike Fuentes is just...ahhh. There needs to be more stories about him. :] I love your style of writing, it makes sense. The purple font with the black background is the only thing that bothers me a bit. It sort of distracts you and takes away from the story. Just saying. It'd be easier to read if it was just plain black on white. Anyway, I'm subscribing! I already can't wait for the next update.
btw. ^ That is a comment fail. It sucks when people can't even write meaningful comments. Haha I'm a comment nazi, I know.