In Sickness And Health - Comments

chelsaya (100)

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love it

September 12th, 2012 at 06:32am

chelsaya (100)

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love it

September 12th, 2012 at 06:32am

DANJJJ (100)

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I agree, this was amazing, with only a few grammar errors. You should definately do a long-term fic with this same idea, but with a little more detail in the sex, and a longer sex scene. And just touch up those errors, and you have got me sold. For what it's worth, which might not be much, I have read probably about 2-300 stories, both fanfiction, regular fiction, non-fiction, and articles and studies, and yours is definately one of my top favs.

October 10th, 2011 at 04:53am

Purr Like A Cat; (100)

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Oh my fucking god I loved it so beautiful please write some more of anything Joick

September 24th, 2010 at 01:22am