Our Sweet Pandemonium - Comments

this is going to sound stupid, but I just came to the conclusion that the dog in the story and one of my old dogs share the same name! hahaha I don't know why it took me so long to realize that >.<
this was also very sweet. I love how they have so much chemistry without revealing detailed historys, they're just natural with each other. also, the humor in this one was very well done. I loved the bit about the kink hahaha it was cute how well they played off each other.
doing wonderful!!!
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thanks! I sort of wanted to get across how so alike they are even though they come from completely different worlds! Thanks for commenting too :)

awwwwwwww.
and we're back to the mirror and shirt lifting! :DDDDD
this chapter was really sweet. I liked how it was sort of effortless, how they stuck together during a complex situation. it was heartwarming how careful and sweet they are to each other without knowing each other that well.
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hahahaha it's so true! Ville shirtless is epic!
holy shit! JAMES! I can't believe it! didn't see that coming from him. nice twist. I had nasty butterflies in my stomach too, and I felt my legs get all restless when I read that part! but then there was lovely, lovely Ville. sighhhh.
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hahahah that is the best thing I have ever read!!! "I'd probably stand in front of a mirror repeatedly and lift my shirt up a million times"......

I loved how the beginning of this was from his perspective. also. I love how it was written as "you" as in I'm him!!! swear, if I got to spend a day in his body, I'd probably stand in front of a mirror repeatedly and lift my shirt up a million times. hahaha he has the best torso! ahhhh. I adore it! and maybe look around some other areas... just maybe... :P
and that almost kiss turned into an actual kiss! yay!
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hahaha yes the mashed potatoes went well probably due to the silliness :P
the mood change in this piece was really intense. very dramatic in the good and bad. and now that James is gone and there was an ALMOST kiss I'm sooo soooo SOOOOOOOOOO looking forward to more!
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thank you! glad someone is enjoying it.
hahahaha i hope his 'gay mashed potatoes' had a good outcome...defintately a very hard thing to do!
just about to add another chapter :)

I loved the imagined dinner conversation. a friend of mine actually came out that way: "so I'm gay... pass the mashed potatoes would you?"
and goodness who wouldn't want to meet him while being almost naked? he wouldn't forget you that's for sure :]]]]
I love where this is going! James leaves for the night and in enters the most beautiful man in the world :]
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hehehe ohhh who will it be?????.......

eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
a sighting! yayyyy!
actually two!
ughhh go away James!
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so jealous: I wish I could own a bunch of horses :/
I wonder who's in the cabin? :]
also, unlike most stories on here, I like how you'r introducing the character first before bringing in the love interest. it's more natural this way.
more pleeeease!
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I think it's more interesting that she's in a relationship in the beginning... and it's not the typical abusive boyfriend either so we don't instantly see why she would leave him for someone else. he's nice and likeable and yet he doesn't nourish her. the situation feels more complex this way and I feel like it's going to further tangle in the future. I look forward to more :]]]
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