GAH!!!! i believe i mentioned that i hate being left when something good happens. ohwells. its amazingly amazing!!! :D OMFG SHES GUNNA GET RAPED!!! o.O
Nooooooooooooooo you need to update like RIGHT NOW!!! Jesus he is a nutjob and a half, and David better find her i mean if he was any kind of man, he would have gone after her if she left alone at night, crying....who wouldn't. He better or else i will loose all my respect for him and then some. Ugh, someone needs to rid everyone of Cjris. All he is, is a psychotic, obsessive bastard!!!
Great update. I just want to say though; make sure you don't make her too over dramatic you know. For me she's cried way to many times. This is just me because in the start she seemed like this strong and confident young woman and for me it doesn't make a lot of sense why she sometimes seems over emotional.... This is just my opinion and you may have a reason for her being like that seeing as you know the story a lot better than I do hahaha. Again just my opinion; no offense is to be taken :)
The drama in this chapter was quite lovely. Although I had hoped it might have been drawn out a bit longer. But Chris is still on the loose, so things shall have to be resolved eventually, eh?
The start of the story gave a rocky start for me, but your way in writing has improved. This is my first time reading it and I like it. I like how you've created a "heart throb" than going for a fan-fiction which could have been the easy route to do, but instead you did this which I have respect for :) Good story so far.
i hate cliffhangers... even though they give me a reason to go DUN DUN DUN!!!!! love it so far. you should mave megan come in and be all like BITCH HES MINE lol ts pretty good though. KEEP WRITING.