Lying To Myself - Comments

  • pageswillfly101

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    PUH-lease continue! I love this story!
    October 17th, 2010 at 02:51am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    HELL YES!!!!!!
    October 15th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • debzxxx

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    Nooo! Not rape :/
    Great update :)
    October 15th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • forever_music

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    OMG! the suspence is killing me update soon!!!! really soon. xD
    October 15th, 2010 at 10:00am
  • BurningDownNeverland

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    Will you just UPDATE already?! like ik you just did but you can't just leave us here WAITING for another update! ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
    October 15th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • iLIKEitLIKEthat

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    GAH!!!! i believe i mentioned that i hate being left when something good happens. ohwells. its amazingly amazing!!! :D OMFG SHES GUNNA GET RAPED!!! o.O
    October 15th, 2010 at 04:11am
  • Hayleyniicole

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    Nooooooooooooooo you need to update like RIGHT NOW!!! Jesus he is a nutjob and a half, and David better find her i mean if he was any kind of man, he would have gone after her if she left alone at night, crying....who wouldn't. He better or else i will loose all my respect for him and then some. Ugh, someone needs to rid everyone of Cjris. All he is, is a psychotic, obsessive bastard!!!

    But yeah, UPDATE RIGHGT NOW...please??
    October 15th, 2010 at 03:32am
  • Tragic_Ending

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    gahh.
    you need to update.
    and sooooon
    <3
    October 15th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • SHYLA01

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    Great update.
    I just want to say though; make sure you don't make her too over dramatic you know.
    For me she's cried way to many times. This is just me because in the start she seemed like this strong and confident young woman and for me it doesn't make a lot of sense why she sometimes seems over emotional....
    This is just my opinion and you may have a reason for her being like that seeing as you know the story a lot better than I do hahaha.
    Again just my opinion; no offense is to be taken :)
    October 12th, 2010 at 07:07am
  • forever_music

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    Awww David is such a cutie :) love the chapter. update soon!!
    October 12th, 2010 at 06:56am
  • dsnlkjanfv

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    The drama in this chapter was quite lovely. Although I had hoped it might have been drawn out a bit longer. But Chris is still on the loose, so things shall have to be resolved eventually, eh?
    October 12th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • over the rooftops.

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    yayeehh!
    more please :D
    October 12th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    I seriously love this story!!! I can't wait for David and Amber to get together!!!!!
    October 12th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • BurningDownNeverland

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    omfg update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really really love this story it's amazing!
    October 11th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • Tragic_Ending

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    loved it.
    <3
    October 11th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • SHYLA01

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    The start of the story gave a rocky start for me, but your way in writing has improved.
    This is my first time reading it and I like it.
    I like how you've created a "heart throb" than going for a fan-fiction which could have been the easy route to do, but instead you did this which I have respect for :)
    Good story so far.
    October 11th, 2010 at 10:52am
  • iLIKEitLIKEthat

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    i hate cliffhangers... even though they give me a reason to go DUN DUN DUN!!!!! love it so far. you should mave megan come in and be all like BITCH HES MINE lol ts pretty good though. KEEP WRITING.
    October 11th, 2010 at 07:36am
  • dsnlkjanfv

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    New character, & David getting jealous. Makes me giggle a bit. :)
    October 11th, 2010 at 06:48am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    I have a feeling that Chris isnt actually normal yet. This can't end well.
    October 11th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • izzylizzy95

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    Hey does david look kind of like chace crawford cause thats how i picture him
    October 11th, 2010 at 05:38am