A Gangsta's Girl - Comments, page 2

Shay Kazaam (100)

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Geez, the emotion in that last chapter...I almost cried. Don't take long to update again!

August 1st, 2012 at 08:57am

Oblies (100)

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This story is amazing! I feel so bad for Murder though. You write really well, so keep it up! Looking forward to the next update

August 1st, 2012 at 01:37am

Domie (100)

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I was sitting there the whole time shotuing "No!" As the children in my house looked as if I were crazy. XD good update

July 31st, 2012 at 04:40pm

Im_A_Fan_Of_Myself (100)

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Omg im soooo happy your updating again

July 31st, 2012 at 06:10am

simply me (100)

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I'm so glad your updating again. I love the update cocoa is something else she is my favorite character. I can understand where murder is coming from but atleast she told him before he got out and was blinded to the fact she messed around on him.

July 31st, 2012 at 05:57am

VixL (100)

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I really like this story. I think that your main character, Cocoa, is very unique and creative. Your story also has a very developed plot that keeps the reader interested in Cocoa's goal, which (to me) is that she is a badass mercenary/assasin. She has faults, feelings, and the way that you write makes me feel like she's breathing. When I read this story, I kind of imagine it be like a really cool graphic novel. Basically, I really like your work as it is some of the best urban fiction I have read in a LONG time. Please keep it up until you have finished this story and able to mail it to a publishing company.

July 29th, 2012 at 05:13am

Domie (100)

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I know that took a lot out of you, but I'm proud you got something out. Filler or not, it was great.

July 26th, 2012 at 07:33am

Swaggin.Ass.Doll (100)

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I liked it!

March 24th, 2012 at 02:01pm

caylah (100)

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loved it keep it up

October 28th, 2011 at 11:32pm

young'lovee (100)

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Its about time ithought I lost you on this story
And I love the layout

October 23rd, 2011 at 08:12am

kill.the.messenger (100)

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totally on edge here. update soon?

August 2nd, 2011 at 08:31am

lovingme1st_246 (100)

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this story has to be one of my faves
you detail everything perfectly
and it almost makes you feel like you're somehow connected to the story
sorry i haven't been on my game with commenting and stuff but my internet jus got cut back on so i didn't even know that you had updated

July 2nd, 2011 at 08:21am

Domie (100)

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I know I'm so slow with this, but after all of the half-ish days I got my attention span together and read. Me gusta este capitulo, mas por favor? (I like this chapter, more please)

June 9th, 2011 at 07:36pm

Shay Kazaam (100)

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i love the mystery you put in this...this story is beast!
i would love it more if you updated more lol...

May 30th, 2011 at 02:40pm