Be my Love - Comments

I liked the first two but felt that this one jumped in time with no explanation or reason so it was hard to get into as it started out with no background on the characters or where they came from. I wouldnt have known what part of the story they played if i hadnt looked at your characters tab first to see how it was related to the first two stories. this is just my opinion of course but i prefer the first two compared to this one.

I loved this chapter... Like I do all of them :) Seeing my mail telling me that you had updated, I actually opened my mouth in shock. Haha, I just kept thinking 'Awesome! It's been updated!' and so on. This story's absolutely amazing, and it's so fun to read about Dai and Jaiden.

And now....
Ankica! Ankica! Ankica! Ankica! Ankica! HI! Is there an update coming up? Cause this story's awesome! :)
Heheh, blame Rebecca for this! She told us to bother you! :P

T__T This is so beautiful! When I saw you had updated I basically shit a brick and then started jumping around my grandma's house in joy whilst screaming about how freaking awesome your story is and how happy I am you updated!
And I love Dai XD He's just too funny... too funny I tell you. And their relationship is so entertaining to read about, I love it!
Please update soon- I really really really really really need more of this story!!

U have to update! Its so freaking good! Im like in love with it!!!!

This chapter was SUPPPER amazing! the only thing, and im not sure if you are aware of, is that after a quote by someone, you wont say who said it but will say ..."stated after sitting down....
that was a horrible example, but that happened a few times during this chapter and it confused me a bit.
besides that, it was amazing! I LOVE this story!

DUDDEEEEE. I absolutely love Dai XD He is so badass and sexy and just GAHHHHH. He said Jaiden in his tight jeans was sexy, but has he ever looked in the mirror? Because that boy is mighty fine *drools*
Anyway, I loved that chapter, and it made me laugh so darn much (I started crying... yeah... out of laughter and happiness and all that good stuff!)
And I just wanted to say, Jaiden's sister freaks me the hell out... she'd better say away from Dai, because Dai has Jaiden, who is also another sexy butt. ;]
So... update soon? :3
p.s. Sorry about the fangirling comment... your boys are just too amazing!

Hahaha it's cool, it's still a great story no matter how it's written :) and it's awesoooooome how you updated so quickly this time and yes! it is another great feeling!!

On another note, HAHAHAH HE KNOCKED JAIDEN OUT!!! That's so funny ^.^ Poor guy, why couldn't he have just stayed still? :P

THANKS AGAIN FOR UPDATING! :D

So I just started reading this today and I read all of what you have so far. It's really good! I love it. And I haven't been a victim to tons of waiting for updates since I just started it...anyways, you have one more subscription :)

OHMYGOSH~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO HAPPY~!!!! iloveyou~~~~!!!! i DON'T CARE THAT ITS BEEN FOREVER, YOU UPDATED AND I LOVED IT! DYING OF HAPPINESSSSSSSSSS!!!!! XD
i never gave up, ive just been so busy. and i understand about the writing problems but that doesn't matter anymore, because you updated!!!!! :D dlagkhsldkfjasjdgADFSK;LJASODGHASLDKFJLSFHG
happy happy happy day!!!!

*SQUEE!!* YAY YOU UPDATED!!!!!! Ohmygosh, I absolutely love this story and I saw the email notification and I was like 'YESYESYESYESYES!!' 'Twas an awfully great feeling :)

Hopefully you can update soon enough :)

YOU UPDATTTTEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDD!!!! *dies of happiness* I really love this story, and when I saw you had updated my brain exploded. No joke.
Please update soon- this story is AMAZING and never fails to make me laugh :]

Wow, I feel weird being the only one commenting after such a long time o.O

But anyways, I really love this story and I would be so totally awesome if you could update it! Please?

I love this! Update soon:)!<3

when are you going to update this story? because i love it and miss it VERY much!
soon please!

Update!!!!!!!
it's a good story that you should definitely continue

Hey becca-chan update soon ;) kay?

please update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!! >.<

I just read the last two updates and....wow they were long! lol, but really good. Like, amazing. I actually went back to the first one to find out what the names of Ryan and Aaron's friends were.... and then died of amazement :D
Are they ever going to realize that they know each other(their parents I mean.) and I kinda expected Jaiden and Dai to like.... make out or something xD but that was just my wishful thinking, I mean Dai did say Jaiden was hot.... I dunno, nut I kinda felt bad when Dai broke down in front of him. D:

oh man, i LOVE this story... so unbelievabley f☆cking much <3 keep going!!!

i just read the entire series and oh my god i love it!! update soon! PLEASE!