I just read the entire story; it was so good! The character development, the humor and story line was great. At first I thought it would be something like 'The Proposal' but then three chapters in I knew that this was going to be something different and great. A great story and it would make a great book and even a film.
This story is truly amazing. You did a really good job at writing it. Your characters were developed perfectly. I got a feel for each of them right away. By half way through this story, I was in love with Ben and routing for this to end in his favor. I loved this story so much.
This is now saved to my top favorite stories. Ive only ever save about five stories in that folder. This is right up there with the best.
I loved the ending!!!!!! and I got super excited cause my birthdays march 18th to!!! I'm sad that it's over but I hope there's another story for little Ben or Milly maybe
I'm so sad that it is over I really enjoyed this story thank you very much, it brightened my day every time I got an update notification for this story
Aw, I can't believe it's over! Such a good story, absolutely loved it, but it's sad that's over!! Good job, and I'll be checking out your other stories ;)
Okay, so because I was sooooooooooo lazy to comment of every chapter, I'll comment on the book overall since I just finished it....
OMG. You are a goddess at writing. I remember reading your other book "Into Thin Air". You really do have an incredible gift :) I think you should publish your works. They're best-seller material ;)
Now that I know it's close to over, I feel like crying. But I shall wait until it DOES end for that...:)
I love this story soooo much and will be sad when it's over. but all good stories have to end sometime - if not, you'd just get tired of them, and then where would you be?!
Does Ben have a license? I don't remember but that boy shouldn't be allowed to drive Just the thought of him driving is simply terrifying YAY They won't break up Ben is so adorable when he gets scared or insecure and stuff Kipp is weird and I'm starting to like Catt more