Broken Bones, Broken Smiles, Broken Hearts - Comments

Please, please, please update? I love, love, love your story.

don't leave me in suspense please update soon as you can

Great update!
I love the way he is so intrigued by her.
And I can't wait to learn more about Dottie.

Woops,
secret discovered:)

Wow, from the guy's point of view.
Different, that's all i can say.
But i like the difference:)

Keep going, and don't let anything put you down:)

darling no matter how discuridged you get never stop writting this story till it's done!

I have to say this is great.
I love that it is written in the guys point of view, you hardly ever see that.
You've written it so perfect, everything he's thinking and it's just great.
I really want to know what happened to Dottie.
Can't wait to read some more. :]

I think it's very interesting, the first chapter made me want to get to know Dottie way more than the paragraph describing her.

first ch. deffinitely draws you in, keep going:b

I like this one. Most pov's are from the girl, and this isnt. Cant wait for more!:)

more more more :)

please continue writing the story!