Bad things come to those who try - Comments

Wow, very nicely done! Yes, a little confusing, but i love it, it's sort of random at places, but that's what makes it great! Ah, those kids are so evil and creepy.

Hey cuz, pretty good so far. The first couple of chapters kind of confused me at first figuring out how she was good when she was killing people but you tied it together pretty nicely. I'll let you know what I think when I read the last chapter ^_^