Mad World - Comments

i actully lost this story D: im trying to find it if i do i will put a new chapter soon

I noticed that you haven't posted a new chapter yet, I assume that's beacuse you got discouraged by the comments above or just the first one, you shouldn't be though. Like the first comment said she was trying to be rude, I try not to though because it's just mean. I think your grammar could use a little help and if you need a layout for this story ask me, I will happily make you one!(that is if this story is still alive) I like the overall concept of this story and I think it's great, so you should keep updating it:) Don't get discouraged, ask me if you need help:)

I agree with the person above. Be sure to use spell check, hun. Your grammar is a bit messy. If you need help, you can call me, Erin. And if you need an editor I can help you with that also.

Alright, I'll be perfectly blunt with you, I'm trying to be rude.
Your grammar could use a lot of work. There's spell check on Mibba if you need it.
And the layout is a bit boring.
Also, you could space out some paragraphs.
Good luck with this story :)