I Never Told You What I do for a Living - Comments

i liked it, i like the idea that its out of order, and i'd like to see more.

This is good.

But confusing.

More soon I hope.

Most of the chapters in this story are. They just worked out that way. I had to re write the begining because my mom's pc ate it (damn thing) but I'm almost done with it and shoudl have it up soon. Thanks!! :)

Long, but good!! =)

I bet it is...who the hell writes a story out of order? I do, I guess. I wrote the chapters for each character as they came...decided to link 'em together later...*shrugs* oh well. Bad idea, good idea...you never said. Anyway...

This is a first...