Harlot - Comments

Wow.
I really love this so far.
I hope you write more.

Is there more?
I swear, I have never found a writer anything like you.

dude i love this, the fourth chapter especially
your stories are so fuckin g

I love the idea that their so short.keep it up

Once again, THE LAYOUT IS GORGEOUS. Okay, I should stop saying that, but I die the second I see them :3 I'm excited to start reading this~
Chapter 1: Oh, my, it really is short! But I love how much emotion you put into it. Also, the main character - or harlot - not having a name adds major character and mystery to an already gorgeous story. Btw, Hailey is a bitch. I don't like her at all. I do like, however, how feisty the main character is. She gives an IDGAF vibe, but she retains this classiness that I love, especially when she says that Hailey should "keep an eye on her toys". x] Awesome opener! <3
Chapter 2: Oh, my. Katie made me LOL a bit, though it's crude, haha! I definitely like this main character; the poor thing, however, is only falling farther into this stereotype :(
Chapter 3: Okay, I officially love this main character. She's so nonchalant. I get this vibe from this story that made the 'new kid' might change the main character and get her to stop being so...sluttish. I dunno, I'm giving my mind bunny a heart attack >.<
Chapter 4: You, my dear friend, have this insane - not in a bad way! - way of words that makes my jaw drop to the floor. So the main character has a bit of an Achilles heel, hmm? Plot twist, maybe? Let's see~
Chapter 5: Her! Who is this Her?! There are so many possiblities as to who she is; she seems, like, almost another personality in this character. OH MY GOD AND NOW IT'S OVER WTF WHY!? D:

I'm begging you; from the bottom of my teeny-tiny heart, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, JAZZY, WRITE A SEQUEL! I will personally pay you a nice sum of moolah to do so :3

/loser

I loved this. I really did. I enjoyed every second reading and I really do hope that you write a sequel to it :D <3

so short=( but amazingly written nonetheless!

Okay, girlie, when I read "Ribbons," I hadn't read this yet.

So I suppose I cheated you with that comment!

This was by far the best thing ever.

Ava's right. The chapters are unfair, girlie.

Whattahellofagreatjob!

<3 x (:

I like this <3

God dammit woman. I've been subscribed to this story for awhile and I haven't been able to read it, let alone anything that I'm subscribed to, and now that I've read it I want to slap you and shake you until you give me more. I love these type of stories, while I know they're so easy to write because of the length and what not, they're still incredible because there is so much emotion put into them. I love how she is fully aware of how dirty she is and she doesn't care. It reminds me of Easy A but instead of her pretending to be a slut she actually is one, and personally that kind of makes it more deep to me. I'm really excited to see where this ends up going, whether or not she ends up getting 'saved' or something bad happens...;/ Love this bbdoll.

I hate how these chapters are so tiny. :)
I love this story, you got me all captivated in only a couple of lines. xD
The layout and banner are really great, the banner fits the story perfectly.
Your descriptions, well I can't think of words beautiful enough to tell you how amazing it is.
This is really original also, how she's the slut, and not the other way around, like it always is, ya know?
Definetly subscribing. <3 :)

Guess who found your updates? :D
Me!!! <3

Now another question, gigglys. Who loved your updates? :)
Mee! (: <3

Like for serious missy. No one has ever managed to stun me as much as you have with such a wonderfully bold story with so few words. I should make you this lovely picture depicting your amazing-ness. :D
<3

More Please? (:
<3

I really love it and I find it unfair that there so short..... Unique and creative even do it short it caputers atention.^_^

BRILLIANT
i love it(:
verrrrrrry creative.
and oh my, you are a GREAT writer.
can't wait for more, fo'sho :D

The chapters are so unfair, missy. D:

They’re so tiny that they get you all wrapped up in your amazing detail and wording (written and spoken) and then leave you with this cliff-hanger, almost, aha.

For some reason, this reminds me of that movie: Seven Deadly Sins. I believe that was what it was called. There was a harlot in there as well. (:

I didn’t find anything wrong with this so far except disliking how short the chapters were, aha. I’m sorry that I couldn’t give you this thorough critiquing like you asked for, but I honestly found nothing wrong. The flow was lovely, as was your word choice. The layout was gorgeous and not too over-done. The idea of this seems super duper original. And gigglys, I love it.

You’re just too amazing I guess. (: