East 12th Street - Comments

hey...i really like this..

i know you haven't updated in awhile.

but you should. and stuff..yeah..

awesome fucking story! :)
Billie should adopt her.
more soon?

awesome =] them poor kids =[ xx

Update!

'cause it's cool. :con:

Can't wait for more!!!

I was only able to read the first chap since I'm in a hurry, but here:

I got into my car, everything around me strangely distant. Every word I said echoed around me, my voice obviously slurred and my movements jerky. I started up the car hesitantly, revving the engine too much and causing it to roar loudly. A mad grin spread across my face. What was wrong with me?

I like the description at the beginning. It drew me in instantly.

In fact, I liked the description throughout. Enough to create an atmosphere, but not too overdone. Billie's character was intact and realistic as well.

And the plot is very unique and interesting. Makes me wanna slap myself for not thinking of it myself.:tehe:

Great update! Thanks for pming me all the time, I know what it's like, it gets very tiring... ^^ Anywhore, more soon? xx
Morgz xx

Sorry about the lack of updates again - I promise to write more soon.

Actually, I'll go and add some more right now. :]

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY
GAH

great chapter!!!

ADOPT HER BILLIE!
ADOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPT!

Finally a good Green Day story... (: Update soon.

nice story! more soon! pleaaaaseeee....

Good update! =) Took long enough! lol How are you?
Morgz xx

I love it! XD
write more soon plz!!!

good Anneliese...i love it.
its like...
yaaay!
O_O

Wow.
I'm interested in this!

I'm subscribing.

heeeeey dudeeeee!!!<3
its amazing.
like the story...just like the other ones!
love em!
and yew!
<333

byee!

I promise to update soon...I'm sorry bout the wait, I've been really busy. I'm having to partly retrain my horse (Mr Brightside, who is my hero...I think) so stuff around here is pretty crazy. Besides that, I have two assignments...

So I promise it'll be up real soon!
--anneliese

nice update soon it rocks :)

This is good.

Hehe Billie gotsa do community service in a care-home...least he don't have to sweep the streets with everyone watching.

Update soon?

Hmm, I bet he sees some of himself in the girl or something. *shrug* I love it. Nice chappie. ^^

-roxie-